Improvements

Sophie - RESEARCH AND PLANNING:

You need to aim for level 3. Research into your target audience needs to be improved with pie charts and percentages, and explanations what these results tell you. Your photography and video needs to have clear work on shotlists and video, well illustrated in themselves and posted on the blog.

At level 2 you’ve achieved only basic research, especially on the target audience, and basic organisation of photography. There isn’t anything on video and you haven’t got a video on the site.

Your other site isn’t visible, and that needs to be found and given to me.

The mark you would get for this is at the basic level - 7, barely a pass, and I know you can do much better than this!

EVALUATION:

Understanding of forms and conventions is OK, but the site doesn’t lend itself to an evaluation that show you understand the role and use of new media: there isn’t any evaluation of the effect of your video - well, because there isn’t one. The survey isn’t completed with results. Your write up has no supporting evidence! You have used technology and ICT in the presentation. At them moment this stands at 8 marks! Please do everything you can to bring it up to a complete level 2, or you will do yourself an injustice!

The site itself would achieve about 18 marks. Unfortunately, you would have 15 marks taken from your total out of 100, because your preliminary site isn’t there, so your total out of 100 would be 18. You won't pass with this mark. You have work to do! Attendance has been one of the problems for both you and Charlie, so please get what you need to do, done.

Polish up your blogs

http://web.me.com/morrmedia/PRODUCTION_WORK/AS_website_planning_(revision)_files/AS%20web%20site%20planning.doc

Please read this and start to get your blog beautiful and polished. Each improvement will help you get another mark - the difference between one grade and another is only a mark.

Survey

Name of interviewee

Age

There are too many security cameras.

Hoodies should be banned in public.

Gender

Ethnic background

Strongly agree

Strongly agree

Salary

agree

agree

Occupation

disagree

Disagree

Religion

strongly disagree

Strongly disagree

Post code

Rate how important these things are.

Policticians and government officials arent truthful enough.

food and warmth

Strongly agree

A secure home

agree

Which of these newspapers do you read?

A sense of purpose

Disagree

Having a loving family

Strongly disagree

very often

often

Not very often

Never

Being successful in life

The times

The daily mail

The internet makes our private lives more public.

The sun

What do you use the internet for?

The guardian

Strongly agree

The mirror

Entertainment

agree

The telegraph

Social networking

disagree

Shopping

strongly disagree

Games

Learning

Rate these sports in order of preference.

News

The general public are misinformed by officials.

Rating

Other

strongly agree

Rugby

1

2

3

4

agree

football

1

2

3

4

People are too dependent on the internet.

disagree

hockey

1

2

3

4

strongly disagree

Badminton

1

2

3

4

Strongly agree

Tennis

1

2

3

4

Agree

Cricket

1

2

3

4

Disagree

Sailing

1

2

3

4

Strongly disagree

Thank you for taking the time to complete this survey.

Curling

1

2

3

4

Netball

1

2

3

4

Motor racing

1

2

3

4

The world uses the internet to spy on people.

Written by Charlie Turner and Sophie Tyndall

Stongly agree

What do you want to be doing in 10 years.

Agree

Disagree

Raising a family

Strongly disagree

Living in a foreign country

Playing at professional level in sport.

Being involved in the music industry.

Have a full time job

Nothing at all

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